[MacPerl-Scribes] Using MacPerl for CGI Programming

[David Steffen <steffen@biomedcomp.com>]

Rich Morin wrote:
>The following is a rather picky and detailed set of copy editing notes
>regarding David's draft.

Thanks for all your work!

I have responded to each of your suggestions, accepting your revision 
in almost every case.

The revised version is still at:

http://tyrosine.biomedcomp.com/MacPerl/cgi_prog.html

The two places where I didn't follow your suggested correction are as follows:


>In my experience, MacPerl works excellently ...
>
>  This is a run-on sentence.

Rather than break up the sentence, I completely restructured this 
part of the article in a way which eliminated the offending sentence. 
I was a little unhappy with it anyway, so this was a good excuse.

>Your Web server may have to be configured to use CGIs, ...
>
>  This is a run-on paragraph.  I would break it at "One of the
>  parameters that..." and (perhaps) at "By default, you need...".

I tried your revision and didn't like the way it read.  In fact, that 
long paragraph contained one idea that should not be split.  The 
problem was it also contained lots of irrelevant information on 
configuring Quid Pro Quo which
I have removed.

I think I have implemented the rest of your suggestions.  If I missed any:
   1) I apologize.
   2) Let me know and I will fix them.

Thanks again.

-David-

David Steffen, Ph.D.
President, Biomedical Computing, Inc. <http://www.biomedcomp.com/>
Phone: (713) 610-9770 FAX: (713) 610-9769 E-mail: steffen@biomedcomp.com

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