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[MacPerl-Scribes] Re: Using MacPerl for CGI Programming



Rich Morin wrote:

<a bunch more corrections>

*WOW*, thanks once again!

All suggestions responded to, mostly by implementing Rich's changes.

The few places I did something different are as follows:

>http://foobar.net/cgi-bin/perl.cgi/more arguments/
>---
>http://foobar.net/cgi-bin/perl.cgi/more_arguments/

I changed it to just /arguments/.

>The reason it works well is that such use is highly controlled,
>relatively light, and because you are sitting there running the Mac,
>a crash or two can be tolerated.
>---
>The reason it works well is that such use is relatively light and
>highly controlled (because you are sitting there running the Mac,
>an occasional crash can be tolerated).

I didn't think your version exactly reflected my intent.  What I did 
instead was to break this into two sentences.

>... or the system call ...
>---
>... or <TT>system()</TT> ...

Your flagging of this here and above made me aware of the 
parallelism, and I modified this second use to includes the 
`backquotes` construction as well.

>"MacPerlPower and Ease"
>"MacPerl Power and Ease"
>---
>"MacPerl: Power and Ease"
>
>  Fix throughout.

The first was obviously a typo.  The loss of spaces seems to happen a 
lot; probably I'm doing something stupid in BBEdit to cause this. 
Anyway, I appreciate your expert opinion on the right way to write 
this, as glancing at the book (which has a newline after MacPerl but 
no punctuation (or just a space on the spine) led me astray.  I also 
had two cases of MacPerl, Power and Ease which I also fixed.

Thanks thanks again again!

-David-
David Steffen, Ph.D.
President, Biomedical Computing, Inc. <http://www.biomedcomp.com/>
Phone: (713) 610-9770 FAX: (713) 610-9769 E-mail: steffen@biomedcomp.com

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