Rich Morin wrote: <a bunch more corrections> *WOW*, thanks once again! All suggestions responded to, mostly by implementing Rich's changes. The few places I did something different are as follows: >http://foobar.net/cgi-bin/perl.cgi/more arguments/ >--- >http://foobar.net/cgi-bin/perl.cgi/more_arguments/ I changed it to just /arguments/. >The reason it works well is that such use is highly controlled, >relatively light, and because you are sitting there running the Mac, >a crash or two can be tolerated. >--- >The reason it works well is that such use is relatively light and >highly controlled (because you are sitting there running the Mac, >an occasional crash can be tolerated). I didn't think your version exactly reflected my intent. What I did instead was to break this into two sentences. >... or the system call ... >--- >... or <TT>system()</TT> ... Your flagging of this here and above made me aware of the parallelism, and I modified this second use to includes the `backquotes` construction as well. >"MacPerlPower and Ease" >"MacPerl Power and Ease" >--- >"MacPerl: Power and Ease" > > Fix throughout. The first was obviously a typo. The loss of spaces seems to happen a lot; probably I'm doing something stupid in BBEdit to cause this. Anyway, I appreciate your expert opinion on the right way to write this, as glancing at the book (which has a newline after MacPerl but no punctuation (or just a space on the spine) led me astray. I also had two cases of MacPerl, Power and Ease which I also fixed. Thanks thanks again again! -David- David Steffen, Ph.D. President, Biomedical Computing, Inc. <http://www.biomedcomp.com/> Phone: (713) 610-9770 FAX: (713) 610-9769 E-mail: steffen@biomedcomp.com ==== Want to unsubscribe from this list? ==== Send mail with body "unsubscribe" to macperl-scribes-request@macperl.org